Greetings. Just commenting to correct your description. You Wrote "It's a Kinetic Novel (Basically means you can make decisions.)" but that is actually the exact opposite of what a kinetic novel is.
nice game. sadly short but I hope that will change soon. the art style is cool. though the animations are a bit goofy and doesnt exactly go with the art style its fine, in my opinion a simple sliding would have been better. it does not take away from the enjoyment of the game. i like the idea of the Kira rizzing up Riya. this game deserves more attention and I hope it will get what it deserves
I unfortunately can only say so much good stuff since the game is quite short.
as for my closing statement, there are improvements to be made and you did a good job so far. also this picture of Lilith is totally unrelated. she will watch you in your sleep or something. best of luck with your project :)
Yooooo thanks for trying out what I've made so far :D
This is my first time making anything like this so I'm just throwing stuff at the board to see what sticks, I'm appreciative for all feedback and the game is luckily getting an art revamp because I made every sprite in 30 minutes lol.
The game is kinda barebones for now, but next update will help solidify its identity I think.
I'm appreciative for the Lilith I shall treasure the picture xd
I can tell it's your first time. (perfectly fine) I would support but im broke.. eheh..
anyhow, I am interested in the art rewamp. once I'm done with matpating the game that is. and remember, do not rush things and take your sweet time with them. "perfection takes time"
It's alright if you can't support, I'm doing this as a passion project more than anything I've never really expected to make money off this.
I'm just thankful to receive any kind of feedback, also you will be pleasantly surprised by the next update then when it comes to lore and things to speculate.
sounds epic though I am having a hard time reading the site because of the font and bright colors. but it's more of my fault. anyway. wish you best of luck with it
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Greetings. Just commenting to correct your description. You Wrote "It's a Kinetic Novel (Basically means you can make decisions.)" but that is actually the exact opposite of what a kinetic novel is.
That is all. Good luck with your game!
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nice game. sadly short but I hope that will change soon. the art style is cool. though the animations are a bit goofy and doesnt exactly go with the art style its fine, in my opinion a simple sliding would have been better. it does not take away from the enjoyment of the game. i like the idea of the Kira rizzing up Riya. this game deserves more attention and I hope it will get what it deserves
I unfortunately can only say so much good stuff since the game is quite short.
as for my closing statement, there are improvements to be made and you did a good job so far. also this picture of Lilith is totally unrelated. she will watch you in your sleep or something. best of luck with your project :)
Yooooo thanks for trying out what I've made so far :D
This is my first time making anything like this so I'm just throwing stuff at the board to see what sticks, I'm appreciative for all feedback and the game is luckily getting an art revamp because I made every sprite in 30 minutes lol.
The game is kinda barebones for now, but next update will help solidify its identity I think.
I'm appreciative for the Lilith I shall treasure the picture xd
I can tell it's your first time. (perfectly fine) I would support but im broke.. eheh..
anyhow, I am interested in the art rewamp. once I'm done with matpating the game that is. and remember, do not rush things and take your sweet time with them. "perfection takes time"
It's alright if you can't support, I'm doing this as a passion project more than anything I've never really expected to make money off this.
I'm just thankful to receive any kind of feedback, also you will be pleasantly surprised by the next update then when it comes to lore and things to speculate.
sounds epic though I am having a hard time reading the site because of the font and bright colors. but it's more of my fault. anyway. wish you best of luck with it
id love to play this i wish it had a mac build :/
I didn't know if I'd really get Mac players but your wish has been granted!
I hope you enjoy the game (❁´◡`❁)